One of the most important moment in my life is my niece's birth, all my family was waiting for that moment. I received a call in the morning and I leaved my job to go to the hospital, It was a relly nice moment, my niece was really similar to my brother, I felt like if she had been my sister the one that I never had. Since that moment my life changed, she is part of my life.
She is one year old her birth was the moment I'd been waiting for. My niece brought happines to my family, tha is the reason why I chose this special moment.
Hi Andrea,
ResponderEliminarThanks for sharing your story! Just a few things to be careful for:
-It would be "a" (not "an") special moment
-Careful for run on sentences. Remember that if you have two clauses that work by themselves as complete sentences, you can't connect them with a comma.
Check the following link if you're confused:
http://sitzmanap1.blogspot.com/2010/10/run-on-sentences-and-comma-splices.html
Thanks!
Ryan